Jesus, I enjoyed looking through your photographs that you have taken so far. Your work is very strong and appealing when you work on doing something to the best of your ability it seems. I can see your unique and crazy talent just by staring at that portrait you drew of your favorite music artist. That drawing is amazing man, I am telling you that you definitely have awesome talent and you should be here for a Fine Arts Degree, not a Bachelors Degree in Graphic Design! LOL no, but really you have a gift and are definitely capable of drawing amazing art man, so keep that in mind.
When viewing through your “Motion and Stand Still” photographs, I really found that the strongest photograph was the “Blurry Motion” photograph because of the way the girl is swinging with the motion blur and her opacity is lowered as if you can see right through her while she is swinging. At first I did not even see the girl on the swing, and that is why I love that photo so much. It is very unique in my opinion man. Also, playing with the color and having the playground in the background with a light source touching at the top of the photograph makes the photograph overall even stronger. So keep up your good work with your creativity. The second photograph I liked the most in the “Motion and Stand Still” photographs is the “Panning” photograph. I like this photo a lot as well because you got the one car in front shot perfectly at a standstill, while the second car behind it is blurring in with the background, which is very intriguing to me. Also, these photographs are the hardest one’s to take in my opinion as well, so great job on these photographs in this specific project.
I 100% concur with what you said about your artist that you picked to research about. The picture you chose to do from Diane Arbus is very eye leading from one person to the next person. It starts off from the left then goes all the way to the right person. The technique used is definitely leading in this specific photograph. Great job choosing that awesome photograph by Diane Arbus.
In your “Rule of Thirds” project, I enjoyed viewing the guitar the most and the metal wiring design thing the most. I believe the “Rule of Thirds” would work the best with the guitar, but that does not mean that the metal wiring is any less significant. This is because with the 4 points your eyes go to when making the 9 squares in the “Rule of Thirds,” the metal wiring will definitely catch your eyes in the most important and eye popping places, which drive your eyes right to those 4 strong points in the metal wiring.
The fruit you chose for the “Depth of Field” project was a pomegranate by the way LOL. The photographs all came out great man. The one that stands out the most is the close-up magnified picture of the top of the pomegranate. It really is eye appealing and strong throughout the whole picture, even though it is somewhat centered in the composition.
The “Self Portrait” photographs you took look great as well my man. I am being completely honest as well. For not ever picking up a camera before in your life, you got some damn good photographs Jesus. My favorite technique that you did in the self portraits was the definition that you tend to show in your arms and chest. It makes the photographs look that much richer, especially when using black and white pictures.
The only few things to criticize you on is to make sure you label all of your photographs with the ISO, SS and the Aperture. Also, try to talk about the project you do a little bit, and say what you enjoyed about it etc. One last thing to consider is to make sure to also label your albums with the projects name. Overall, you did a great job Jesus, keep up the awesome techniques you are using in your photography and do not ever give up no matter what someone says to you. I do not care what anyone says Jesus. I am telling you that you have a special gift that most people would strive for having, so do not waste away the time, make crazy, unique artwork for the rest of your life!
~Sean Deane